Comments : Daughter of a freak

  • 17 years ago

    by Zoe

    Great job! 5/5 keep up the good work!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Oh my gosh. that was SOOO good. thats the best poem ive read ever..or in a really long time. woah! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Danka

    Fantastic!!!! top job, i loved it read well all the way through n it was fanfckintastic wel dun :)
    danka
    sxs

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenya Dawn

    Hey i read all ur poems...yes all of them...lol...all like 200 lol...u write a lot and they are all really good...the 8 rules is great...but i just figured i'd comment just one instead of all of them...lol...and htnx for the comments...let me know when u get some more in here...yours are really good...well later...

    *Kenya Dawn*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenya Dawn

    Hey i read all ur poems...yes all of them...lol...all like 200 lol...u write a lot and they are all really good...the 8 rules is great...but i just figured i'd comment just one instead of all of them...lol...and htnx for the comments...let me know when u get some more in here...yours are really good...well later...

    *Kenya Dawn*

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow this is so sad and u hv yet again potrayed it so beautifully, ur poems are just so amazing and full of emotions

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    Good poem, very intense and lots of great imagery. I really liked it. However, I would personally change the "no more" on the last line to "anymore."

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wonderful job! I really liked the way the rhyme flowed! thx 4 the comment!
    amandaxOx
    *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wonderful job! I really liked the way the rhyme flowed! thx 4 the comment!
    amandaxOx
    *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Woww.. this was just oozing emotion! excellent is one word that describes it! this was so beautiful.. i just loved it! 10/5! xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    This is such a sad sad poem....really touching......really well written...nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    OMG! THAT WAS SUCH AN AWESOME ENDING!!
    I LOVE IT!!
    100% Perfessional :P

    Jen
    Comment #1

  • Wow! your a great poet!
    XoOx molly

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very touching poem, excellent ending. Nice flow

  • 17 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Mystifying ending... i hate child abuse... it's a sad thing that i wish would die... child abuse is never right!

    thanks for the comment ;) i get lots of poems from people who can't believe i'm so young. it's just that if you know something, it doesn't matter how old you are because you know something important. :) i'm glad to be a poet though. im glad u r too ;)

    have fun.

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was very good, but it made me sad... I liked it a lot, keep it up, hun.

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Loulou

    Sorry it tooks so long but congrats on third i love this poem. It is so sad but wonderfuly written excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    I really like the message behind this poe, it is really good!

  • Hey, well done, good poem 5/5
    ~She Died Screaming

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Very well written. i love the imagery. and the wording gave just the right picture into my mind.. i could see everything i read. well done