I'll have to disagree. The rhyming felt shaky if not a bit forced. I think if you go more detail just a bit into things maybe it'll feel more in depth such as:
"i know that you will protect me
and not let me fall into the debre"
One thing try and capitalize your i's in poems. Second, well how does it feel to know you'd be protected? If you keep asking yourself questions, it'll eventually help you write.

I like the rhyming in this peice, you used some really unusual rhymes which i have never seen before. the content is very portrayed and the structure good.

I thought it flowed brilliantly!
I really like this one, especially some of the rhymes!
Well done!! 5/5
*Gem*