Because it's wordy, a bit too much, it fits a child's voice. At first I thought it was inovisble frined but I loved how it turned out to be a rubber duck.

This was really cute it made me smile. nice job keep it up 5.5 thanks for your comment. : )

Awe thats adorable! A very sweet poem! I liked how you used it in a childs voice, very cute! In some places you got a little too wording and the flow was thrown off and you could use a comma in a few places, but other than that, I loved it. It's poems like these that put a smile on my face!

Awww! That was so cute. Tehe. Rubber Duckys are cool lol. Really great poem you have here. I loved it lol. Put a smile on my face. So it deserves a 5/5 Awesome job. Keep it up!

`taleee xx

I heart rubber ducks, lol.
I may be 17 but i have a collection, lmao
5/5 simply cos you made me smile and it was a kick ass poem!
*Gem*

Wow this was soooooooooo cute!!!!!! this is something i could definately see getting published in a childrens poetry book or something, you should definately look into that...maybe childrens writing is your thing, ya know?... that was like awesome it flowed way to good. -jen-

Awww what a lovely poem. It's very childlike and I could actually imagine a little kid enjoying spending time with the duck before going off to bed. It's not all that a funny but certainly sweet and childlike. Well done.

Haha, a bit different, but I liked it. I just want to ''Rub a dub dub in the tub'' Lol

Well written. I loved it. Keep up the good work!!!

Peace, Joe

Haha that was cute, you seem to be very lighthearted and carefree, i enjoyed it a lot!! good job!

**meggie**

This was cute, I liked it, very.......child-like lol, I dont know if you got that or not but anyways, it was good!

It was a cute poem, and sweet and everything child like but it didn't flow in some place and personally was not very captivating. However i gave a 4 as it was well written with a good structure and a nice topic.

Haha Funny Poem Megan.

Love MKKA!