Comments : Regret

  • 11 years ago

    by fairygirl

    She will come to you!!!! if it is love she will come :)
    xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Awww good job!! i loved it cuz it almost made me cry. my boyfriend would never admit doing anythin wrong. hmmmm..... maybe that's a clue. hah, he's a jerk anyway. sort of.

  • 11 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    Wow, its so heartfelt, great job! not very many guys would admit they did anything wrong, which makes your poem all the more worthwhile, again great job, five for sure.

  • 11 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Heeyy....A Great Poem I Would Say! I Loved It! It Has A Message From Your Heart! Keep It Up...
    Take Care...
    Luv,
    The Bell :]

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I love the energy..you're still so talented wow! keep it up buddy..how r u?? ttyl.

    Lissa

  • 11 years ago

    by stargirl49

    Awesome job, david!!!!!!!!!!! i can't believe that a GUY your age is so talented. keep up the good work!!!

    love ya,
    maggie

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... that is so sad, it really made me cry cause I can kind of relate to it. You did a great job at expressing your feelings on this. I loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kellsie Lynn

    Wow! just like the other stuff you wrote the meaning was awesome. and she will come back to you if itz really true love david. I think itz awesome that you can express yourself like that and that you admitt to messing up. whatever you did I'm sure it'll all work out in the end but again if you need to talk or anything you know how to contact me. best of wishes... good luck,

    Kell

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Ha!
    I can write a comment now, lolz
    This is really good
    Argh, you make me feel really bad at poetry, haha
    awesome, i could really relate
    < 3 Tina

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Ha!
    I can write a comment now, lolz
    This is really good
    Argh, you make me feel really bad at poetry, haha
    awesome, i could really relate
    < 3 Tina

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Hm... Katie let me read this one when you gave it to her. So sweet, that was the first time I read any of yours. Gah, you are so good at poetry... I must admit, you are better than me. But don't get too excited, lol... that's not a great feat.
    Awesome poem, no joke.
    Love
    Tina
    < 33

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Hm... Katie let me read this one when you gave it to her. So sweet, that was the first time I read any of yours. Gah, you are so good at poetry... I must admit, you are better than me. But don't get too excited, lol... that's not a great feat.
    Awesome poem, no joke.
    Love
    Tina
    < 33

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Carr AKA Snickers

    Hm... Katie let me read this one when you gave it to her. So sweet, that was the first time I read any of yours. Gah, you are so good at poetry... I must admit, you are better than me. But don't get too excited, lol... that's not a great feat.
    Awesome poem, no joke.
    Love
    Tina
    < 33

  • 11 years ago

    by ShaeBaeBae

    Wow! that was great! i only wish i can be that deep! my boyfriend did something like that for me. he wrote me a letter apologizing for trying to make me a better person. he and i are still tight! 5\5 keep it up homes!

  • 11 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow that is so amazing.. i really love this poem. i have read a few of ur other poems and i love htem too. i really like how it all flowed together.. great job.. keep on writing u have talent.. great job 5/5
    take care
    angie