She will come to you!!!! if it is love she will come :)
xxx

Awww good job!! i loved it cuz it almost made me cry. my boyfriend would never admit doing anythin wrong. hmmmm..... maybe that's a clue. hah, he's a jerk anyway. sort of.

Wow, its so heartfelt, great job! not very many guys would admit they did anything wrong, which makes your poem all the more worthwhile, again great job, five for sure.

Heeyy....A Great Poem I Would Say! I Loved It! It Has A Message From Your Heart! Keep It Up...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

I love the energy..you're still so talented wow! keep it up buddy..how r u?? ttyl.

Lissa

Awesome job, david!!!!!!!!!!! i can't believe that a GUY your age is so talented. keep up the good work!!!

love ya,
maggie

Aww... that is so sad, it really made me cry cause I can kind of relate to it. You did a great job at expressing your feelings on this. I loved it.

Wow! just like the other stuff you wrote the meaning was awesome. and she will come back to you if itz really true love david. I think itz awesome that you can express yourself like that and that you admitt to messing up. whatever you did I'm sure it'll all work out in the end but again if you need to talk or anything you know how to contact me. best of wishes... good luck,

Kell

Ha!
I can write a comment now, lolz
This is really good
Argh, you make me feel really bad at poetry, haha
awesome, i could really relate
< 3 Tina

Ha!
I can write a comment now, lolz
This is really good
Argh, you make me feel really bad at poetry, haha
awesome, i could really relate
< 3 Tina

Hm... Katie let me read this one when you gave it to her. So sweet, that was the first time I read any of yours. Gah, you are so good at poetry... I must admit, you are better than me. But don't get too excited, lol... that's not a great feat.
Awesome poem, no joke.
Love
Tina
< 33

Hm... Katie let me read this one when you gave it to her. So sweet, that was the first time I read any of yours. Gah, you are so good at poetry... I must admit, you are better than me. But don't get too excited, lol... that's not a great feat.
Awesome poem, no joke.
Love
Tina
< 33

Hm... Katie let me read this one when you gave it to her. So sweet, that was the first time I read any of yours. Gah, you are so good at poetry... I must admit, you are better than me. But don't get too excited, lol... that's not a great feat.
Awesome poem, no joke.
Love
Tina
< 33

Wow! that was great! i only wish i can be that deep! my boyfriend did something like that for me. he wrote me a letter apologizing for trying to make me a better person. he and i are still tight! 5\5 keep it up homes!

Wow that is so amazing.. i really love this poem. i have read a few of ur other poems and i love htem too. i really like how it all flowed together.. great job.. keep on writing u have talent.. great job 5/5
take care
angie