Nice use of diction, it had an old and wise poetical feel to it. I think you captured some interesting ideas with your words and descriptions. The format is different too, I like different. Good write.

Thanks for the comment on my poem "That Time Of Year." I wrote it because it's coming up to the anniversary of something tragic, it suddenly hit me earlier and I had to write about it.

Oh la la Miss Kaylee shall I call you Juliet?! haha jk...

OH WOW! I just loved this write...tis a rare occasion you come across a poem like this but I'm glad I did because I enjoyed this...you mixed old writing with new and made it into your own masterpiece! Bravo my dear bravo!
Chelsey

Wow, intense. I loved it. Awesome write. Good use of wording and the Flow was amazing. Keep it up.

Peace, Joe

Very nice poem, I really like the language you brought into this poem, it gave it a sense of sophistication. Very nice write.

Yet again. Very Nice. The word choices and flow was right on. And had the Shakespeare thing going again. Good Job.

Short and brillant. I'm lovin' how you're using this old english language. It's really different. And interesting. Another wonderfull piece. I loved it, Really. 5/5

`taleeee xx

I love it. I love the old language you used, a lot of people are / would be intimidated to use it but you mastered it beautifully =)

This is a really great poem

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.