Comments : That Time Of Year

  • 11 years ago

    by StephanieH

    Wow, what an AMAZING poem, really great job it's very well written. And it has a very deep meaning.. can you comment my poems in return, thanx.

  • 11 years ago

    by jenny

    This is amazing it is exactley how i will feel next year on the day that my boyfriend died and every day this year that meant something to me and him i would really like to know what you are talking about but neways i loved it very very very good

  • 11 years ago

    by Mich

    I am really touched by your poem... It is beautifuly dark and painful if that makes any sense...

  • 11 years ago

    by Kyra

    This has so much feeling to it and there is alot of things happening. Well done i liked it. 5/5
    ~Kyra~

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    My speech is slurred,
    But not a drop has passed these lips.
    Nothing - but a drop
    Of my own misery in a
    Salty liquid form,
    And it tastes better blended with
    Waterproof mascara.
    ((Amazing how you described crying.. Just amazing))

    I really enjoyed this.. I know how I interpretted this, but I'd really like to know how you did.. Contact me and tell me if you can/want.
    Nicely written.. Very strong.. You're an amazing writer.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    How can anyone NOT give you a 5/5? Jealously perhaps. This is an EXCELLENT poem. My favorite part is:

    My speech is slurred,
    But not a drop has passed these lips.
    Nothing - but a drop
    Of my own misery in a
    Salty liquid form,
    And it tastes better blended with
    Waterproof mascara.

    Again Great Job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by kelS;

    I really liked this one. it was a really good poem! good job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by R0SANA

    WiiLL THANKS F0R LETTiiN ME KN0W AB0UT THE SPELLiiNG PART (L0L) ii AiiNT THAT 0F A G00D SPELLER...WiiLL YEAH ii LiiKE Y0UR P0EMS S0ME BiiG W0RDS BUT NiiCE! (L0L)

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.