Wow, what an AMAZING poem, really great job it's very well written. And it has a very deep meaning.. can you comment my poems in return, thanx.

This is amazing it is exactley how i will feel next year on the day that my boyfriend died and every day this year that meant something to me and him i would really like to know what you are talking about but neways i loved it very very very good

I am really touched by your poem... It is beautifuly dark and painful if that makes any sense...

This has so much feeling to it and there is alot of things happening. Well done i liked it. 5/5
~Kyra~

My speech is slurred,
But not a drop has passed these lips.
Nothing - but a drop
Of my own misery in a
Salty liquid form,
And it tastes better blended with
Waterproof mascara.
((Amazing how you described crying.. Just amazing))

I really enjoyed this.. I know how I interpretted this, but I'd really like to know how you did.. Contact me and tell me if you can/want.
Nicely written.. Very strong.. You're an amazing writer.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

How can anyone NOT give you a 5/5? Jealously perhaps. This is an EXCELLENT poem. My favorite part is:

My speech is slurred,
But not a drop has passed these lips.
Nothing - but a drop
Of my own misery in a
Salty liquid form,
And it tastes better blended with
Waterproof mascara.

Again Great Job! 5/5

I really liked this one. it was a really good poem! good job! 5/5

WiiLL THANKS F0R LETTiiN ME KN0W AB0UT THE SPELLiiNG PART (L0L) ii AiiNT THAT 0F A G00D SPELLER...WiiLL YEAH ii LiiKE Y0UR P0EMS S0ME BiiG W0RDS BUT NiiCE! (L0L)

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.