Apart from where you rhyme "you" with "you" this is very sweet. I couldn't have managed anything so tender at 18. You put me to shame, young man! :-)

Well I basically adore you now, after reading your profile (i love writing & i guess that's all that matters) and this tender poem.
I really loved the lines,
"It's not love, what it is, I'm not sure.
Nothing seems black and white anymore."
I think I liked them because it's so blunt -- just out there. I don't know, I am a touch odd at times but they were magnificent lines.

Amazing poem.
5/5