Into thine Hands

by Kaylee   May 23, 2006


Secret—Why do thou haunt thee morning hours?
Twas soul tears which trickled down fragile face.
Cup mine face into thine hands pure heartbreak.
Plague these chambers with sorrows, you shall.

Misery—Why do thou infect thee night’s sleep?
Twas demons which walk mine mind’s floor.
Litter mine flesh with specks of ashen dignity.
Tis a volcano buried beneath cracked layers.

Pillow—Ought thou to comfort thee tonight?
Mine head pounds these sorrows into thee.
This beating heart fails to swim above water.
Regrets thy allowed continuance access to.

Oh misery! Shall thy forever be under spells?

©Kali (Kaylee)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Secret—Why do thou haunt thee morning hours?"
    if you're doing old modern english (aka shakespearean) then i'd make do = dost, and I think 'thee' should be 'the'
    ~~~
    "Twas soul tears which trickled down fragile face.
    Cup mine face into thine hands pure heartbreak."
    I feel like t'was has an apostrophe.. but I could be wrong. I'd hypenate soul-tears, because it seems like a phrase. I think a 'your' should go in front of 'fragile' to make the sentence more grammatically correct. I'd avoid using the word 'face' twice so close together... maybe another descriptive noun.
    ~~~
    note: 'thee' means 'you'. If you're trying to say 'my', then that's just 'my', I'm pretty sure. Try checking out this link:
    http://www.cummingsstudyguides.net/xThou.html
    ~~~
    "Oh misery! Shall thy forever be under spells?"
    In this case 'thy' was supposed to mean 'you', but 'thy' means 'your'. I'd use 'thee'.

  • 17 years ago

    by Clarissa

    I thought the poem was well put and thought out. I liked the way you wrote it with the language... i felt like i dont see poems like this often.
    -Clαяissα ♥

  • 17 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by amor

    Wow i like the worlds... the old times... it's like a poem from renaissance ot romantic period....

  • 17 years ago

    by Candice

    This piece is most excellant, very well written and the descriptions are awsome, very good with the use of old english. 5/5