Love your use of the Old English words.
Excellent Poem!

Another of my new faves, I wish I could write like this. Beautifully done. Timothy r

Haha, I can see you are being inspired by the old english. It's leaving you with some great ideas for poems. Awesome sutff!

Very shakespearnish ^_^ I loved it, sad and yet eloquent great word usage :)

I see you're liking this style of writing, I'm seeing it alot in your new stuff.
How many times have I cried into a pillow when I was upset at night, too many times to count. I liked that stanza of this poem.
Powerful and emotive write.

This is by far my favorite poem of yours! So beautifully worded...

"Misery—Why do thou infect thee night’s sleep?"
^^^ love this line!

"Pillow—Ought thou to comfort thee tonight?
Mine head pounds these sorrows into thee.
This beating heart fails to swim above water."
^^^ WOW! Excellent writing, really love this poem...

So Beautiful! Thank you for such a wonderful poem!

Rich

Wonderful job, a break from modern language. Keep it up shakespeare! lol

Haha! I love this one. I loved the older style of English words. It's short and everything. I like it. I tend to like the Shakespeare sound and feel of it. Wonderful work. :)

Wonderfull yet again. Theres not much I can really say, Without sounding too repeditive. Just another really awesome job. You really know how to get the readers attention and keep them interested. Keep it up. 5/5

`taleeee xx

Twas soul tears which trickled down fragile face.

the description of soul tears is extremely powerful.

the ending is brilliant. on the whole, a beautiful piece of work.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Another amazing poem! :) I love the whole use of older english... You pulled it off very well. You had some great word usage in this..
"Litter mine flesh with specks of ashen dignity.
Tis a volcano buried beneath cracked layers."
Those are my two favorite lines. You did a great job on this!

Wonderfully done! I love this poem.

I love this poem, the old english is wicked

Beautiful poem, and sad. Good work! And nice english!

WOW. Very nice. I have never seen a poem written that way and I read alot of poems also write a lot. Well check mine out.
Morana

Beautifully written!

This piece is most excellant, very well written and the descriptions are awsome, very good with the use of old english. 5/5

Wow i like the worlds... the old times... it's like a poem from renaissance ot romantic period....

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.