Wow!!..soo dan n soo true!!..n soo touching!!..wow!!

dis feeling ..sometimes i also feel like dis, but sometime i feel Happy to be alive...

So much feeling, loved this poem 5/5

Hey huni this was really p0werful very 0uching s0o sad. 0hh huni. very deep

lOve frOm
d0ra

Crys,
You read this to me on the phone the other day, and I almost cried. Same affect now. I'm sorry for everything that you are feeling. And you know I'll ALWAYS be here. NOt a day will go by that you can't call me and me talk (if I'm here of course) :) But you know I'm not going anywhere, and I hope you don't either!! I love you SO much!!!!
Brooke

Dieing inside is the worse kind

of death there is. but the feeling

goes away after you begine to see

the new things in life. to die inside

is sometimes good becuase you can

be reborn so to speak with someone

who's heart will tak you in

Crystal. omg. you think noone cares thats crazy. all those talks we use to have. how i told you i would always be there? did you forget? not think of me? you know im here for you. anytime. day or night. dont let things get to you that bad. talk to someone. gurl bye. hugs. im here

Wow, this is an excellent poem. I like it a lot. It's a little longer, but it's still a great poem. I know you feeel. This is very touching and meanful. Great job!! 5/5

Wow..very long... but emotional, and sad, and just wow.. overwelmed with emotion.. dglad that i read it.. great write.. just like your other poem i read... you have talent girl!!! please read and comment on some more of mine.. interested to know what you think...kirstyxxx take care xxx

This is really good!!! i can totally relate. u communicate ur feelings through really beautiful words...keep up the good work, cause it is definately good work....if u could comment on my poems i'd appreciate it
andi

You have a gift for writing and i love the way you say how you feel. i hate for people to feel like this...it kills me because ive felt that way before. you have to have faith...dont do something you might regret later because once u die...ull look back and the only thing u can do is wish you could go back and comfort every person who has cared for you...again i kno i dont know you but its the truth..ive gone through a whole lot and i hope you understand what im saying...peace out!

Wow.. this is soo sad.. but good i like it nicejob!!

Awww! i love this poem, its so sad. its heaps well written! 5/5 oh and thanks for commenting my poem 2!
xx

Aww even tho i dont know you i care! i care about everyone. i really do. i enjoyed this poem because sadly..i often feel this xact way home gurl. way to put how u feel into words. i loved it so much. keep it up but dont be sad cuz i hope everything will turn out okay. ;)

Very very good!!!!! VERY TOUCHING TO READ!!!!