From HELL to HELL

by Goth marionette   May 25, 2006


My scars scream
with a hidden dream
on the day of celebration
of unseen light in immortal vision

So let me die in the gloom
let my blood stream in my room
and let me crawl to the doom
The bell of my suicide is about to boom

The Snake inside of me licked my purity,
it took me to my painful eternity
Don't save me, it will kiss away my pain
Tonight the sky will pour bloody rain.

Wounds of my poisoned heart
will show my tears in the dark part
The endless hate of my life
will give me itself the knife

To heal the pain into fire,
with no soul or life's desire.
Hardly do I give up on the only smile,
that I felt once before for a while.

I will be burning there in hell.
I don't care I burn in this life as well.
Shake my hand and say good-bye.
it's the last breath and I'm going to die.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow i am absolutely blown away by this amazing poem. Each time i read a poem of yours i am left speechless and always thinking. Your words are so haunting and remind me so much of my life and how i very often feel.

    The Snake inside of me licked my purity,
    it took me to my painful eternity
    Don't save me, it will kiss away my pain
    Tonight the sky will pour bloody rain.

    this was my favorite stanza of your poem and just really made me think about the evil snakes in life, it really got me thinking of my brother wh o very tragically passed away 2 weeks ago due to a drug overdose, drugs were like the snake which took away his life and "kissed away his pain."

    I have always been a huge fan of your writing and have always been in love with your stunning, dark and haunting style, you're amazing!!!! Keep it up cos you're really doing an outstanding job!!!!
    love
    shellaine

  • 15 years ago

    by alone

    Nice this is really cool

  • 15 years ago

    by Paul London

    Wounds of my poisoned heart
    will show my tears in the dark part
    The endless hate of my life
    will give me itself the knife

    Really great stanza, This is what I call reaching deep inside and purging out to the surface.

    I Look forward to reading more. You have a talent for finding a way to make the words come together.

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude this poem is so dark and pure that's coming in your heart love it (^_^) I'll add this in my fav 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Um... I'm left absolutely
    speechless after reading that
    it was so dark and beautiful.
    I held onto each word as I was reading
    and got an image of the despair
    and pain. I've always believed that earth is a glimpse of hell and this poem
    really showed that.
    I loved it. This was stunning!!
    Great job!! 100/5 :)
    ***Take Care***
    Love shell

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