Awww this is just cute!!!
your poem is amazing I luved every part and stanza!
your poem was amazing, I swear I luved it with no doubt!! just you didn't hv to Capitalize the word Hell in the title!
but anyway its really gr8
keep it up
Much Luv
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Great poem!

It's so dark... But it's so strong... I really liked it... Style of this poem is amazing... Well done!

Wow. it is a great poem and there are strong expressrions. keep up5\5

Spectacular poem. Hell is such a strong subject for poetry.

Ashes to Ashes
Dust to Dust
A world full of Sin,
Betrayal, and lust.

Great write from poetry Knight

This poem called out to me just by the title. I am glad to know that it wasnt a mistake. I loved the look into the dark world. It was amazing. Keep up the good work.

5/5

With Love,
-Ally

This is a reallly good poem I love it
keep up the asome work

Pretty good! I need to do more poems like this.

Um... I'm left absolutely
speechless after reading that
it was so dark and beautiful.
I held onto each word as I was reading
and got an image of the despair
and pain. I've always believed that earth is a glimpse of hell and this poem
really showed that.
I loved it. This was stunning!!
Great job!! 100/5 :)
***Take Care***
Love shell

Dude this poem is so dark and pure that's coming in your heart love it (^_^) I'll add this in my fav 5/5

Wounds of my poisoned heart
will show my tears in the dark part
The endless hate of my life
will give me itself the knife

Really great stanza, This is what I call reaching deep inside and purging out to the surface.

I Look forward to reading more. You have a talent for finding a way to make the words come together.

Nice this is really cool

Wow i am absolutely blown away by this amazing poem. Each time i read a poem of yours i am left speechless and always thinking. Your words are so haunting and remind me so much of my life and how i very often feel.

The Snake inside of me licked my purity,
it took me to my painful eternity
Don't save me, it will kiss away my pain
Tonight the sky will pour bloody rain.

this was my favorite stanza of your poem and just really made me think about the evil snakes in life, it really got me thinking of my brother wh o very tragically passed away 2 weeks ago due to a drug overdose, drugs were like the snake which took away his life and "kissed away his pain."

I have always been a huge fan of your writing and have always been in love with your stunning, dark and haunting style, you're amazing!!!! Keep it up cos you're really doing an outstanding job!!!!
love
shellaine