Just like heaven..

by Jessica   May 25, 2006


I walked into this gorgeous garden
And it took my breath away
I could not tear my eyes
From this scene
It was just
So stunning
So Exquisite
So divine
It was just like heaven..

The colors were just spectacular
Scarlet petals falling from flowers
Olive green leaves glittering in the sun
Golden rays of sunlight making everything sparkle
They brightened the area
Once bare and deserted
And made it bright and friendly..
It was just like heaven..

The little fountains
Contained so much hope
So many dreams
They flowed over and over again
Never stopping,
Never giving up
The little cherubs that stood atop them
Would smile and remain
In a warm pose
Welcoming you to join them..
It was just like heaven..

The tall, thick trees
Stood proud and tall
They were the wise
So many experiences
Were entwined within their trunks
As you sat under
One of those wise old trees
You would absorb that wisdom
And it would always help you
To make the right decision
It was just like heaven..

As you turn around
And walk out those large black gates
You turn to look back
And say goodbye to heaven
Until the next visit
And remember..
It was just like heaven..

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  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow... this was really good... its almost like i was there in that place
    beautiful write
    5/5
    love
    amy
    ps-hey u dint tell me if in the poem... it was murder or suicide...
    let me know

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I sincerely love this poem. You have a very intriging and thoughtful way with words. I love the image that you created with this piece. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by stranger than most

    Loved the poem was like i was there 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    Wow way deep abd beautiful your descriptive words make it easy and enjoyable to read i can like actually see it GREAT JOB
    keep the faith keep the talent and keep the ability to write so beautifully

    -laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow..u really painted a picture..that was amazing 5/5