The Tin Man (nonet)

by Kaylee   May 26, 2006


Upon mine hollow heart beats thy night
Twas fireflies which grace mine soul
Sweet flittering creations
Refuse bright misery
Revealed within stars
Reflected on
Cold metal
Sweet tin
Man

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  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Interesting choice... a little Shakesperian lol... it was different... i'm not quite sure what the nonet is so i'm probably just a little confused that way... but good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Ahhh holy crap.

    That's one of the best nonets I've ever read.

    Sorry. You've recieved a few comments from me, and I don't normally comment like this, but everything about this poem struck me in a fantastic way.

    I've tried writing a nonet, but the syllable restrictions make it very difficult for me to feel descriptive. This poem didn't have any problem with that, and not only used a great deal of creative diction, but also great metaphors and symbolism...

    Wow, that's a good poem. Makes me wish that I voted 5's less so that this 5 would be more special, sorta lame on my part actually.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Good job Kaylee!
    It's hard writing poems with restrictions on it, but you did a great job. Very good story too, reminds me of the Wizard of Oz. Good stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Disturbed Poet

    I like this....mysteriosu yet obvious.....cool

  • 17 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Great poem, I loved it!

    xoxoxo Haley