Comments : Eyes like fire

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that is really sad and filled with so much emotion. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and you were very descriptive in it. You did a great job on this. I loved the imagery and everything! Great job! Definitely a 5/5***

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    W.O.W

    This was so good. Really powerfull. Though its a little bit long, it kept my attention right to the end. I especially liked these lines;
    "You have attacked me
    You have abused me
    You have destroyed me
    You give me one last look
    With those eyes like fire
    And walk out the door"
    They really stood out to me. Your poems are so good. Don't ever stop writing mmkay? 5/5 =P

    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    Heyy Jessy~~ it is such a powerful but also kinda sad poem. It contains something really impressive inside this poem. I love this wonderful writing.
    GOOD JOB and KEEP IT UP~~~

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I just aodre this poem. It has so much emotion and feeling put into it. The flow was there and the wording and rythym was consistent. This part however stood out the most.
    "I am lying in the dark
    For the rest of eternity
    Forever to remember
    Those eyes like fire.."
    Great Write Hun.

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This poem is really very good, extremly well written with a good flow and some amazingly powerful sections. the expression is clear and the content runs well throughout making a super peice of poetry.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Felix

    Gosh
    thats powefull
    im speechless
    my fave part was "Forever to remember
    Those eyes like fire.."
    excellent
    5/5
    xoxox
    *MiSs MurDer*

  • 17 years ago

    by vika

    Is it true? like if it is its an evil person! where do get inspired 2 rite such gr8 pems! anoder poem dat has made me feel like wut the gal must hav felt!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Great poem i loved it. i used to be abused, and i know what this is like. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Resplendant Rose

    You said to do the poem that caught my eye, and this one just reached out and grabbed me! then i read it...it has so much emotion and pain heaped in there, i absolutely loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Resplendant Rose

    You said to do the poem that caught my eye, and this one just reached out and grabbed me! then i read it...it has so much emotion and pain heaped in there, i absolutely loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked it, it was well worded, flowed brilliantly and was just a good poem, lil sad but the emotions were expressed well.
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Again, very strong ending
    "As you walk away
    My head bleeds and bleeds
    Leaving a puddle around me
    My heart rate gets slower and slower
    My eyes flicker open and closed
    And then
    Suddenly
    I am lying in the dark
    For the rest of eternity
    Forever to remember
    Those eyes like fire.. " this is my favorite part.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    Wow, this was very intense so eerie and surreal yet shocking and hit so hard to home, the anger and desperation and fear are brilliantly portrayed.

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    WH0A!! very deep poem. I like the last part the most, it wraps up the poem very well.

    Thanks for your comment

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job i like the eyes like fire thing keep up the good work 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    WOW! very emotional. it was very deep. in the ending u told as if it was happening now. well writen the ending:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    I really enjoyed how you kept the focus on the eyes but it wasnt all there...I really dont know how to say what i want...none the less great poem...
    Emma 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    WOW!
    Fantastic ending! I love this poem!
    It came across to me so strongly!
    Well done!

    Jen

    Comment #1

  • 17 years ago

    by nightschild

    My god
    you really are a poweful writer.
    "You just needed to take out your anger
    And the body you used
    Was mine.." thsoe lines are so emotional..very impresed
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow... i love this poem and its soooo full of emotion... it had a GREAT ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you kept my attention the whole way thru... sooo great :D you better never stop writing!!!!!! -Jen- 5/5