This is really good. The flow and rhythm of it held up well and I like the overall message of how things don't always turn out the best. I think you could have gone into a bit more detail, but it was really good. You definitely shouldn't have gotten a 2 for this...you were definitely a victim of downvoting. I really like this though. Good job.

That was a really good poem. Well, hope the votes bring you up. You were at a 2? Who would do that? Don't worry, I got you back up ;)

I can relate to most of this poem

Wow this is really good. i like it a lot cause i can defiantly relate to it. amazing writing :) keep it up 5/5

Rage and great anger can speak loduly in this poem. a good try .

keep it up,
aMANADA

Awsome poem...you can really see the emotions you have put into this poem
keep up the great work :P
5/5

Cool write! The rhyming was great with out a doubt! I loved the biginning the most. The end could have been a bit different but it's still a great poem! Keep it up! ~peace out~ ^_^

Wow i like this it reminds me of my relationship kinda!!

This is awesome..it flows so well. I love it. <3=]