Comments : Why do the ones we love have to die?

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw. This really touched me. Made me think about a few things. Really good poem. With a great message, And it's sad. Buuuuut. Awesome. Tehe. Keep it up 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Aww Boo!! this is an extreamly sad poem, but a topic that can touch all of its readers. death truly is a sad thing, but..just as you wish for them to remember the good times, you do the same. dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. death is part of the cycle of life, and we cant change it.

  • 17 years ago

    by vika

    Hey! it's a relli nice poem! well its relli bad when sum1 u love dies. n we r lucky dat no 1 we love has died! awesome poem tho.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I dont think this depressed me because it was very well written and was kind of asking things i once wanted tro know the answers to.
    well worded and flowed well too
    love Taraxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is so true. i like it a lot. its very good but sad. keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    So true, just so beautiful and sad-when you work out why people die please tell me because i've been struggling with this question for a long while. Good writing here

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by nightschild

    This is an exisite and touchong poem
    i understand how you feel.. losing some one is so hard....
    i hope your ok:)
    my fav lines are
    "We will never ever forget them
    And all the beautiful memories
    They gave to us.."
    so awesome
    5/5
    catch

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked this poem, packed with a lot of emotion. So sad..

    I can answer that question..
    Because we all have to die sometime.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cagil

    Jessy...You know what...you are right....i dont get it too!! its just not fair!!! But still i love the poems that you right with true feelings..they just sound very nice...I LOVE IT!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Summer

    You had me at the first stanze but by this line:
    To no longer
    Hear their laughs
    To never again look into their eyes
    And tell them we love them..
    I was in tears, I lost my mom & all these things are starting to fade
    Amazing poem! from an amazing writer

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Very sad poem Jessy, I'd like to know why people have to die to, but I guess it's life and that's what happens. But anyway. I really loved it. I agree with Philly aswell. I"m going to enjoy reading the five more poems I need to comment. ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Turtle

    Awesome work! really good. 5/5 heartfelt!

  • 17 years ago

    by Turtle

    Awesome work! really good. 5/5 heartfelt!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I agree...it expecially sux wen the person did nothing to die..anyway..very easy 2 relate 2..5/5
    #2

  • 17 years ago

    by Turtle

    Great this is really good

  • 17 years ago

    by Lendell

    I love it. i want 2 no y people die 2

  • 17 years ago

    by Lendell

    I love it. i want 2 no y people die 2

  • 17 years ago

    by Sar

    Great poem, really emotional

    sarah xx