"Forever...you don't even know
how long that is
It has lost all meaning..."

that is so true nice poem you did very well on it keep up the good work 5.5

You speak so much truth in this piece my dear. It's very well thought out.
I myself have felt much of what you express in this. I guess it's all a part of life.
I really liked this part, so relatable:

"&& all the pictures that I took of those last days together
got lost in the transaction"

Well done. Take care and keep it up~Holly

I liked the poem. I thought it flowed very well, and I appreicated your creative use of punctuation. Is there some reason why you use the double ampersand to mean 'and', instead of just typing the word? Habit? Or is there some significance?

I liked this poem it was great... keep on writting..please comment and rate my poems...thanks~DARK~

Great job in this one! i like it a lot!

"I really liked this poem a lot. It's so deep and has a great flow. I couldn't stop once i started. Really great. Keep it up."

^ This was by fsr my favorite part. Great flow, and filled with emotion.

I don't know you that well but
(I'd like to change that)
I know what it's like
To not know where your home is
To only know where your soul is