Comments : There was once a time

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    It was Beautiful, Neil. Great write.
    5/5
    Love, Strawberry Queen. Ha.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    Neil, i loved it! VERY good job!! i love you my bubba... mwahhhh xoxo 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Awwwwww such a beautiful poem hun, very well written. *hugs* 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Aimee

    Aww this poem is so beautiful yet sad. i love you neil mwah xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by JustAnotherLonelyGirlHilary

    Im sorry she died hun:( im here for u and like uve always said they live on in our hearts great poem 5/5

    ~Hil~

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Beautiful piece
    im very sorry
    i love your work
    thank you for everything
    love
    ~Emma

  • Omg, that was sad, but good

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awww hunnie thats so sad
    i cant belive it hun
    xoxroxyxox nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by NATALIE

    I really liked this poem but it was kinda sad remember im here if you need me ok love ya bye

  • 17 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Goodness, that was such a beautiful poem. I'm so very sorry to hear about your loss. I hope you are healing well, for something as tragic as that can damage a person more than anything. But still, a wonderful poem that's brought deep inspiration to me. Thank you. 5/5

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)