Hey ure poem is good

Once again, I think this poem is very good. You are very good keep up the good work.

Totalli awesum
i luved it alot
5/5!!!
ur gr8 at riting
take care
~AllCutUp~

Omg i love this poem..its like so true..cuz most ppl do die for love..great work 5/5

I reall l0ve this p0em, it sh0ws al0t 0f em0ti0n and y0uve d0ne an excelent j0b writing it! keep up the great w0rk, 5/5!
l0ve maddy x0ox

WOW! A very sad and intense poem! Jpoet*

Wow this is also good. i really love the story in it, its amazing your a good writer!

Wow, this poem is so sad. I've felt like this many times. it brought tears to my eyes. But that's how it really is this day in age, people don't take love the way they should and make fun of it. You brought all the emotions together beautifully. I loved it. 5/5

The thing I admire most about your poems is the fact that the flow is very good. Good flow makes me want to read on.
Also the storylines are another thing that attracts me to wanting to read more of your poems.
It's hard to keep me interested in reading on, but you manage to do that pretty well. So coming from me this is a big compliment.
Moving to reading part 2...

Okay. I frikken love this.
The opening is powerful with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better.
The emotion in this is overwhelming.
The imagery you painted is breathtaking, it was like I could see hear and feel everything that was happening.
I was thrown off by the fact that some parts rhymed and some didn't, but on the whole, this is amazingly done.

I absolutely loved this poem. there wasnt really a flow or a rhythm to it. but i would have to say it is one of the best poems i have ever read. i couldnt even take my eyes off the screen. 5-5