WOW! very touching.. that was so sad.. it brought a tear to my eye.. great poem 5/5 xx

Great sequel to the other poem, very good.

Hey that is good! i love ur poem! plz comment on some of mine!

Great ending..loved it..it sounded like true love 5/5

Great poems both parts!! very sad though!! but in thr right way if you know what i mean?:S lol comment on some of my work i'd really appreciate it! xx:)

Wow that was great! it was bitter sweet...it made me cry.....i read both parts and i'm glad i took the time....great rhyme scheme, it flowed well......id love it if u could comment on my poems
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Jezz ppl just need to talk these days, ask questions learn from eachother. its good to know that there are others in the world that think like i do, but your words are much better put!

Wow. I just fell in love with your work. Depressing but it's the right kind of depression. if you know what I mean.

Very emotional write. You managed to describe feelings very accurately.
Also very touching storyline.
Good work!

This is a beautiful follow on from part one...really tugs at the reader's heartstrings.

"I don't believe we'll meet in heaven,
I've had trouble with the fact,
that you were taken from me
so on God I've turned my back."

^^I frikken loved that stanza, I found it so heartbreaking moving and powerful all wrapped up into one...beautiful work on this.

Beautiful flow. I really really liked this poem. It was so sad though! I love sad poems

Wow! i mean WOW! this is really good! you have alot of talent! i really like this poem!!!

I like this poem too. it also doesnt really hav a flow or a rhythm. but i think i might like part 1 more. this poem is just as good its just its not all my taste.