Very good! I don't know what you're talking about this is a wonderful poem! I have felt this way many times! try checking out some of my stuff!

Jerbear*

Another great poem, 5/5

Who ever you wrote this poem for must be lucky to have you too. he sounds like a good guy if he glued back all the peices that shattered everywhere...

lizzy

Aww. I liked it so much!