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  • 17 years ago

    by Burn It Baby. ! .

    Wow this is really good
    And has emotion and passion in it.
    5/5
    It is a very real poem.
    xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Hold on to that teddy, memories dont fade unless you make them fade.
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh lordy - This poem hit me 2x as hard. =/
    Memories came flooding back in as I read. So, naturally - It was a wonderful poem. I agree with Krzysztof - Keep holding that Teddy missy! Lmao. :] Overall, spectacular poem.

    "Instead of a little girl,
    clinging to my bear,
    I am here with a blade
    cutting with despair. "

    ^ My favorite stanza, I can relate so much. ;] Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.