Good Job Roxy. It's sad but I liked it.
Ryan :)

Very good i almost cryed

Hey roxy that was really good! sad but good 5/5 all the way

Beb that was os very good but very sad babe i care for you more than i care for my self coz i love you (i hope yiou wont say bye to me ) coz im dying without you

Hey emilie this is awsome never read anything like it its really good

keenan

Really good roxy keep up the good work :(

Really good roxy keep up the good work :(

Wow... you really are a great poet hun

Wow...been there too...loved it much...keep up the wk and i am here if u need to talk

sheets_2207@hotmail.com

Jennifer

Hey that was good u are very good at writing poems

Thatz a really good oem but i hope you dont cut yourself

Aww baby ....i know what its like....life sucks!!! i feel ya pain.....trust me i have been though alot to.....wow its amazing that we r only 1 and we been and r going though this much!! well im here if u want to talk......

xoxo
~Little Lizzy~

Omg that is sooooooo good like omg i love it like totally

Damn roxy-nearly bursting, but your poems soooo good i want to read all.

october xx

Vey sad and very deep. again a poem teenage girls can relate to (well some of us) i hope your not cutting yourself though...

You know..i reckon you could turn that into a song...its great i love it...
ruby xx

This poem was great
all the words flowed wonderfully
its like you know whats gonna happen
but you have to keep reading just so you can make sure
5/5 for sure!

God good good...

october xx

Well done, sad but well written poem, Great job, Love Mel

Very emotional