Aww, how sweet! this was filled with emotion and you clearly love your best friend very much.. the only problem i could find was here ::

my worth of being you friend begins!
^ it should be "your" not "you

all in all, excellent poem! :)

Yup. I have to agree with Jessy. This was a sweet poem. Your friend is very lucky to have you. =] And although the poem was short and did get to the point. Theres nothing else I can find wrong with it. I liked it alot. 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Great poem, I'll bet ur friend appreciates it or will appreciate it ... Really good job

5/5

...mia...

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

Aww this was simple and sweet. i love your work, your talented bub

much love and many kisses,
bex

Awww so simple and sweet, your friend is very lucky to have this dedicated to her x x x x x x x x