Comments : Mosquito

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a good poem, those little buggers are really annoying, but I can only imagine how bad they are in the Philippines. Where it's hot, humid almost all the time. Really good poem,
    all you need to do, is change 'fiend' in the 2nd last line, to 'friend', so it rhymes with 'end' :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. It was unexpected for me to see a poem called "Mosquito" so thats why I read it cause It was different. I think you did a good job of writing it. Great rhyming too.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem