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  • 17 years ago

    by Cheyenne Lewis

    Awww how sad..Stay up!...By the way..Nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Lisa, even though this is fiction, it felt quite real, a very nice piece of imagery here, fantastic .Love, Tim

  • 17 years ago

    by Denise Butler

    Oh Lisa, in your words I can feel the pain, although you call it fiction..it brings up feelings of confusion, like the person has alot of thinking to do, I can see alot of ppl relating to this . Denise

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excellent poem! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Nice poem! Wonderfully written! Great work!