Comments : The Perfect Little Girl

  • 11 years ago

    by Aussie

    COol poem...things don't seem the way they are. that's a gr8 way to say. so easy to just put a smile:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Fighter

    Amazing poem hun, as always. hope you're ok... take care,
    -xXx-

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥ Nobody ♥

    Wow.....awesome poem!!
    -Leah-

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    This poem felt like you were writing my thoughts on paper. Thos was a great write and I could really relate to the feelings of that poor girl.
    Awesome write!!

  • 11 years ago

    by xXxAngelEyes007xXx

    I love it it is easy to relate to and the ay you wrote it i cold picture the girl you were talking about

    Keep writting hun

    ~*M@R!3~*

  • 11 years ago

    by Colby

    Great poem, that can reach out to so many people. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Deep and heart wrenching write... Everyone has said it all. I think many can relate, or at least feel so drawn back by this poem. Impressive stuff!

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Well, we've all read a million poems like this...the "mask" kind of poems. I think yours stand out a bit...a little different than the norm...I love it! Nicely done!! Sad that it's true life for so many youngsters! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Wonderful poem! It's so well written!

  • 11 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    I like this one like i like your other ones

  • 11 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem i love it.. it has great flow and rhythm.. its soo good i love it.. great job 5/5 keep on writing.. keep ur head held high
    angie

  • 11 years ago

    by May

    You are such a wonderful writer! I love your word choices!! Please keep writing!!!! -May

  • 11 years ago

    by Danii

    Wow.. thats all i can say man your poem is
    amazing.. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Shaw

    Touching

  • 11 years ago

    by Sara

    Again Nicole i am very impressed!!!5/5
    ~sara~

  • 11 years ago

    by Nate

    Tinydancer;
    How true your poem is. I see girls everyday in my classes who put on the happy face and then we find out through letters or notes that they really are struggling in life. Good poem!
    Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

  • 11 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Another amazing poem, very sad and true. Love it and luv ya! :P xx

  • 11 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it you know your my favorite poet!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    This poem is so true. I know how this feels, unfortunately me, as well as a lot of other people have to put this "mask" on everyday. Great poem. Keep up the good work.
    Tammie

  • 11 years ago

    by intensions

    Damn i love your work...