Well, we've all read a million poems like this...the "mask" kind of poems. I think yours stand out a bit...a little different than the norm...I love it! Nicely done!! Sad that it's true life for so many youngsters! :)
How true your poem is. I see girls everyday in my classes who put on the happy face and then we find out through letters or notes that they really are struggling in life. Good poem!
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"