Nice, I like it. Is this by any Chance Harly??? Write somemore.

OMHoly Longness. I loved it though, it was awesomely good. =) Keep writing, you'll go far.. Hmm... but anywho your a great poet and STOP WRITING ABOUT HARLEY.. lol jk jk love yaz- Meg

Wow. Even though it was really long. It was really good! You used really great imagery [I can't spell that] I really did like this poem, It had it's sad moments in it, But also happy. Really awesome job!! 5/5

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Wow, that poem was so AMAZING... The words, description, emotions. WOW. Once I started reading it, I had to keep on going. That was so well written... well done.. keep it up.
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Running around, trying to get ready,
hurrying to finish,heart beating steady.
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Maybe not to make it take so much page, you can do that ^^

god bless

That poem was so awesome. it is so suspenseful and i love how it ends! 5/5

Thanks for the comment. By the way i really liked your poem it felt like you were there telling the story and it rhymed nicely.
good job

Unique poem, great ending.

This poem really struck me! Honestly I am not a fan of lengthy poems, but after I got to the third stanza I could not stop reading..my eyes wouldn't let me! GREAT..GREAT..GREAT JOB

Wow that was awesoem i was really into to that one...veryy nice.