Wow great work i can actually feel the desired love....5/5

Thats really good
can you read my poem
i'm just a shadow

Thats really good
can you read my poem
i'm just a shadow

Holy Bananas Kayle that was amazing!!!

I mean...I normally don't leave comments like everyone else saying "thats a great poem" but Kaylee I think for once I just have too..I'm speechless I don't know what else to say besides how great this poem was!! Definatley a favorite recent love poem of mine!!
Chelsey-Lynn

This poem is really confusing. I couldn't really follow the flow. But the metaphors we're really clever. Anyway, Nice work, keep on writting, your friend Al...

Great write... Your words are fantastic!! Metaphors are outstanding and the flow was perfect. Good work!

Very unique style of writing indeed...very nicely written...

Wow, kaylee, I cant believe i just read this, its brilliant. I loved every line of it and the title was catching too. Keep writing my friend.
xxxxx

I'm really jelous of your talent! This poem was great Kaylee. I also loved these lines:
"Radio playing same old songs.
Lyrics change with wind speed."

This was yet another great peice from you. Everything flowed well, and the rhyming was good. And the meaning behind it. Love and hate? Hope that's what it was meant to mean. That's the kind of message I got. Anywho, It was a great peice. Keep it up!! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Awww, so sad yet so very very good! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

-Stephanie-

That was pretty good... ok well really good... some of the parts left me confused, but it had meaning and mystery behind it, it makes you think like some of the great poetry... but i did get lost in some of it... o, check out some of mine again... some of those things you said were just typos sry... i didn't realize i had those though

GREAT POEM....i felt the emotions just reading it...i had flashbacks of memories of situations that make me relate to your writing...i really loved it...keep it up

truly,
Amber

Thanks for the comment on my poem.
Just returning the favor...

Really great poem. 5/5

jamie

Good job...

This is very deep poem i think is great keep up the good work. hit me back some time.
*trusty*

I luv this poem maybe u can read sum of mine keep up the good work