Comments : My daddy left me tonight

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    Chelsey, this poem was spectacular. You put so much into it. I only hope its not true and you were only writing from another perspective. You're a wonderful poet.

    "When everyone hears me weeping
    When everyone asks if I’m alright
    I don’t know how I’ll be able to spit out
    “My daddy left me tonight”"
    ^^ I loved this last line! I pulled it all together and it was a wonderful ending. It's hard to talk about problems in the family. I can't say enough how I loved this poem. Excellent job.

    And thanks for the comments :).

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    What a solemn, distressing poem. I hope for your sake, that things aren't really like this. The flow is great, and the poem is just simply beautifully written. An enjoyable, but truly upsetting read. Love ya Chels.... xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Fantasia

    *Tear*

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki allen

    Hey,
    i just thought id comment on your poem cuase i know how you feel my parents are the same way

    xoxo, nikki

  • 17 years ago

    by RL

    I love this poem i can really relate to it.

  • 17 years ago

    by looshluvstuna

    Dat woz butiful it brung tears to my eyes.
    fantastic poem hope to read more of ure heart ure a wonderful poet.
    hope bad times get betta

    luv lea

  • 17 years ago

    by wild angel

    Great job!! im so sorry!! i almost cried *tear* well im sure he loves you with all his heart... sorry again

  • 17 years ago

    by wild angel

    Great job!! im so sorry!! i almost cried *tear* well im sure he loves you with all his heart... sorry again

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam

    I'm so sorry. v.v" I totally feel for you. Well I don't know you but I enjoyed your poem, it's sad and touching. Life gets tough sometimes but keep your head up. Face it head on without fear! >:D yeah. I'm very sorry.

  • 17 years ago

    by fiona

    Wow thats good as.. my parents r always fightin though with me i hate my mum and my dad is the most person on earth i admire and love i just wish my mum left.. you are a good writer keep it up luv fiona :)

  • 17 years ago

    by tiffany

    Wow... this poems really touched my heart. it made me cry. no joke.. you see, my paresnt arent together either, and latley my dad has been acting like i dont love him anymore. i mean, you poem totally said what i was feeling. its a whole different setting then what im in, but it sends out the same exact message. it was great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tanitha

    This poem reminds me of the condition at my own home back when i was about 7. my mom and dad would fight all night long, while me and my brothers just dying in fears. thispoem is great,,............

    just wish this poem don't have to happen to the both of us and the rest fo the kids out there that share the same feelings

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    When I read this I almost cryed. You have amazing talents. I als o love that last line. This was one of the best poems I have read. Great Job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelcie

    You are a beautiful writer because i can tell you write from the heart.
    great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by -Beauty-

    ThAt p0Em wad H0TT..But s@d t00..I l0v3d it..you have M@D sk!lls with tE pen..its Gr3@t!! thumbs up