Very nice Haiku, Doing it 4 times tehe. I liked it alot. Keep it up Jessy =P 5/5

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Your imagery is really beautiful. I would mainly just suggest that you type in the number of haikus that you have in your title. When I read the title I thought there would only be one

Another great poem, enjoyed it alot, the whole idea you are putting forth is really well done, and teh imagery is absulotly wonderful

Beautiful.........loved it bunches...
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Jennifer

Absolutely beautiful, awe inspiring and wonderfully descriptive. A lovely poem.

"Shocks the eyes of us.."
That was the only line I thought was unusually constructed.

Besides that, I thought these series of haiku were well done. They all pertained to nature, followed all the syllabic rules of haiku, and had a slightly deeper message than just what was on the surface, esp. concerning beauty and time.

A deep message of flowing imagery
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Must Say. Perfectly Done. You are an amazing poet. :)

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I did love that Jessy, it was really good my friend
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I liked that it was interesting! great job *my last comment fer now* thanks for joining in the contest you did a great job!

KurMiT

Wow, never thought of writing several haiku's together. Great

Woah, nice haikus! 1 time i had 2 do that 4 english, it was hard, i cant write that little, it bugs me. very nice tho 5/5

Hey...Jessy!! WOW this Haiku flows really well!!! i tried to write some Haikus but i all messed up...:) Wonderful job and i like it a lot!!! Beautiful poem!!

Wow! beautiful hiakus! that was great desciption. they flow well together. I could never write 5 hiakus in one poem, great job!

Great write. beautiful words and imagery. 5/5

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

Wow.. I love haikus. This one made me like them and inspired me to write more! I love the imagery in this one. ugh.. it's just brilliant

I love haikus and this one was really good.. i dont kno how but u always surpise me with your poems

Wow gr8 work! loved all 5 of em! i had 2 do haikus for a 6th grade english project. tis 2 hard 4 me 3 lines isnt enough 4 me 2 put anything into it, yet u did fabulous! 5/5

Loved it! You made it so visual, I loved it! Your a great writer!