Perfect Together

by Flying Phoenix   Jun 10, 2006


I stare quietly at the floor
Those black and red tiles
Evenly spaced and so perfect together
So perfect together
Perfect
Until I break one
And it shatters across
Those rippling lines of chaos
That torment reflected in me
So perfect together

You ask for forgiveness
And I was the one who worried
About hurting you
About breaking you
About loving you

You touched my heart
You held it firm
Then wrenched it from me
And watched it die

And now I sit here
Those tears have dried
That anger has passed
But still I'm broken
You cut me deep
But I love you still
And it aches when I cry

And there are the tiles
Perfect together
But not for me

*Based on something that just happened to me*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara

    And there are the tiles
    Perfect together
    But not for me

    amazing poem! just beautiful....flawless
    --tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Sophie

    Excellent poem..

    so much emotion..loved every bit of it.
    i loved the part about the tiles so perfect together.

    perfect work!

    sophie :)

    p.s thanx for the comment ..i really appreciate your opinion..

  • 17 years ago

    by IML

    Superb!! Thank you for your comment also by the way. My relationships in my pasts 2 years I was living Overseas in Israel has been screw ups and I had finally found my one. Ever since I met her, I grew much love for Poetry. I got so well at it that in 2 months, I started researching and studying it and reading the dictionary finding stronger words and bigger quotes and meanings lol. Thank you again. and VVery VVVVVERRRYYY great poem! lol. bye

  • 17 years ago

    by Fig

    That is such a beautiful poem! the imagery and the language...soo poinant...so lingering. its truely beautiful and theres soo much emotion pent up in it. a truely amazing poem!
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Casey

    Your poem was written perfect and in the moment of me reading it, I seemed to disapear into your words. I know exactly what you were feeling when you wrote this. I love it. Casey

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