Great lyrics... Is this a song of yours? Or are they just lyrics at the moment? Your title? Have you missed the word "Heart" out?

Well. Since I love country. These lyrics are awesome. Nicely Done if I shall say.

Much Love: MPKKKAE. :)

Very nice lyrics here Kaylee. And I have to addmitt, There alot better than all mine put together. As I was reading it, I was actually singing it. And I liked the sound of it. Very well done. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

Kaylee, i thought these lyrics were very beautifully written and i could tell that it was a country song, i love country music and this song was really well set out and the verses and the chorus all made sense. keep it up
xxxxx

Those are some pretty sweet lyrics you got there. I've been writing songs for my band for 3 years. Wow is all i have to say great stuff.

5/5

~glass~

Wow, great lyrics. Everything ran together perfectly! 5/5 Keep up the good work! Thx for commenting on my poem too!

-Stephanie-

"'An in my mind there's a candle lit
'An I know what to make of it"

^my favorite rhyme in the song.

I thought that the lyrics were well constructed and that the rhymes were nonobtrusive. The chorus seemed to work into the song well wherever it was placed, and the lyric length seemed good too. The rhythm was consistant within the lyrics.

Um, Can't really say anything but

WOW

O.O

Dat was sooooooo good
thas great

Bleeding Of Her Own Accord

Emotional lyrics, they have the beat to them to allow me to guess the tune the music would be. You used some touching ideas, and the chorus especially is very catchy (very important in a song).
Only thought is where you keep saying 'an I'm presuming the full word is and, if that's correct, I think it should be an', shouldn't it?? I'm not 100% sure, just a thought.
I enjoyed this emotional write.

Wow, another amazing poem! personally, i find it a bit difficult to read with all the colloqial language, but thats just me.. the emotions are clear and the flow was good! nice write! 5/5

Again, the slang through off the poem. It works when it comes to cutting down syllables and stuff, but for me, I just don't like how it sounds in a song, but I would really like to hear what you have. Still, another great poem/lyrics.

Not bad...
i like country ;]

I luv it! I can imagine this with music behind it!