This is such a wonderful poem...i love this piece of writting

Great poem...i love ur poems..beautiful sensations on this one...just wonderful
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5/5

This was really beautiful a p0weeful piece with a great use 0f w0rds. always luv reading ur w0rk. keep em c0ming =] xx

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Welcome back and as always u came back with a bang, what a great poem, u gave a very surprising twist right at the second last stanza and that simply thrilled me as all of a sudden the track was changed and a love poem turned to be a lost love poem. Its like a complete story has been shared within mere 6 stanzas, beautiful indeed.
i just love ur work.

all the best and take care

Wow your poem was incredibly sweet!
amazing piece of work, great job! Love the ending SO much!
you did a great job hun =)
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Melodic and so flowin... With loving thoughts and feelings... So perfect it's untouchable, yet So pure that it is bliss.

beautiful penned my friend, flowed with beautiful emotions written, what else i can say....well done!

Wonderful Michelle, superbly penned!!!

Toooooo long dude!!!!

Wooooah..
amazing poem.
soo good !! great job/ loved it!

I really love this poem and I love the way you write and put down the words, it makes it really easy to read! keep it up

I really love this poem. You're really good I hope to read more of your poems in the future.

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

I really loved this poem and every other poem. very well written and all match with me, specially this one bcuz im going through this right now..keep up with the good lyrics and rhymin and feelings, you use them all well. 5-5

Some ppl dear, r just faces and inside r empty yet they r lucky enough to meet some with kind and pure hearts who can't tell wut is behind that charming faces. i loved ure poem and esp the last stanza.

All the best and sorry fro my late comment,
Wishy

What a great poem to read. I was really intrigued all the way through. Thought it was very deep and could really feel the message you were sending. The last couple of stanzas were breath taking

well done

dave x

A very nice written poem, your all poems are great. i really like them. you are the greatest poet in this site.

Its wonderful..it reali is. i hope ill read more from u, 5/5

Michelle,
Wow that left me feeling so empty ( thats a good thing). This was written so well. With such detail of a lover then all of a sudden a betrayer, I hope that everything is ok. And again a lovely piece
God Bless
Renee

Farout!!! i loved every bit of that. ur very talented hunny! never give up!! lots of love,
dani xxx

The last stanza and the last line is so beautiful! I always love your style of writing. This poem is so heartfelt... so touching... Wonderful!