Bleeding Hearts.

by Natalie   Jun 12, 2006


Love is formed and hearts are wasted,
Crushed to pieces and torn apart.
Evil lovers stabbing their back,
Taking what's left of their black heart.

What once was love has turned to hate,
It crossed the line and turned to dust.
Bleeding hearts fill the entire room,
Leaving victims no one to trust.

Sitting alone in the bathtub,
Washing every inch of her skin.
Scraping away all the disgust,
Drowning in all her shame within.

Voices, Voices, Unknown voices,
Screeching and deafening her ears.
Bleeding, Bleeding, Crimson bleeding,
Taking her away to her fears.

That one deadly kiss went to far,
Torturing her body, Mind and soul.
Her bleeding heart lays in a grave,
But no one knows her life he stole.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

{Done for contest..And, I tied second =D}

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Very nice, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Wow! I don't know what else to say! This piece was really awsome! The hate really poured through in an odd, beautiful sense.

    Sitting alone in the bathtub,
    Washing every inch of her skin.
    Scraping away all the disgust,
    Drowning in all her shame within.

    Voices, Voices, Unknown voices,
    Screeching and deafening her ears.

    those lines stood out the most, something about them really attracted me to the piece. Wonderful job! I am jealous of your talent!

    ~DAna

  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Wow! I don't know what else to say! This piece was really awsome! The hate really poured through in an odd, beautiful sense.

    Sitting alone in the bathtub,
    Washing every inch of her skin.
    Scraping away all the disgust,
    Drowning in all her shame within.

    Voices, Voices, Unknown voices,
    Screeching and deafening her ears.

    those lines stood out the most, something about them really attracted me to the piece. Wonderful job! I am jealous of your talent!

    ~DAna

  • 17 years ago

    by Margarita

    A very sad and touching poem Natalie again well done. You as usual give it a very touching feeling and congratulations on winning second place in the contest! Second is still a very good place.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SaM*~tbsfan32

    Wow that was very powerful....5/5

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