Comments : My Life Experiences

  • 17 years ago

    by Mimi

    Hey hey girl its yem xxx
    yer girl i liked it! thnx 4 leavin a comment on mine love yaz xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mimi

    Hey its me again xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    This is absolutely brilliant. keep them coming i'm adding you to my favourites list!! thanks for commenting on mine. let me know what ones you like! thanks

    xoxoxo

  • This one's probably my favourite out of all of your poems, very well thauhgt out and very meaningful, keep 'em coming :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade Rossiter

    HAY THIS IS REALLY GWD X

  • 16 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow your very talented! i love your work =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by ragrag

    Great poem...I wish I could start it all over again too...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Good poem

  • Definitely dark and defiinitely makes one open their eyes to the darker truth of reality...I'm sorry to hear about your pain believe me or not, it pains me to hear of such things...from anyone...'cause I do care...need anything just let me know...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kendall

    This was really good :]
    it sounded sortof paragraphy though.
    but i liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This was fantastic also ^_^ I completely understand this one also =p The spelling could use a little work but the flow was great and so were the emotions =) Remember though, that it's the hard things that we go through in life that shape us and make us strong =) 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This is a wonderful write that has enlightened the reader to the darker side of depression. These feelings that you feel are real but can be overcome with help if you desire it. Best wishes young lady. May you one day have the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart.

    sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Very deep emotions.
    Well done
    You take care

    Ps. Thanks for commenting one of my poems, I really appreciate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by MrsBryAnt

    I also like this poem very much. There are many people out there who wish they could change their past but you cant. Your past is there for a reason. You cant just live by your past. You got to move and make yourself a better person out of it. Many people dont like to feel their emotions either but they are there for a reason that no one really knows so we just have to deal with them anyway that we can. Sorry that you have to deal with these things.

  • 16 years ago

    by MrsBryAnt

    I also like this poem very much. There are many people out there who wish they could change their past but you cant. Your past is there for a reason. You cant just live by your past. You got to move and make yourself a better person out of it. Many people dont like to feel their emotions either but they are there for a reason that no one really knows so we just have to deal with them anyway that we can. Sorry that you have to deal with these things.

  • 16 years ago

    by DryMyTears

    Hello, i feel the emotion in the poem. very good. i would try to make it flow a little easier.

  • 16 years ago

    by DryMyTears

    Hello, i feel the emotion in the poem. very good. i would try to make it flow a little easier.

  • 16 years ago

    by Taz

    Hey this one was like totally wow

  • 16 years ago

    by lemmemaskmyhorror

    Awsum .. really nyc ...

  • 16 years ago

    by celina

    Wow.
    that was really good.
    you are good at writing.
    i loved this poem.
    write a lot more maybe you could become famous for them.
    even if they are because of your life expieriences.
    no matter what,
    you are awsome at this.