Comments : Everyone wants something

  • 17 years ago

    by girl who wrote this stuff

    This was a really good poem. I liked it a lot and it had a good ending. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Kool...kool
    no rhymes, and i dont think it really needed any-the words stood tall by themselves.

    keep it up

    october xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    I want the same thing too. people r so demanding. a really good read. keep it up.
    love willow xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by Titan

    Simple and 2 the point another success as a poet.