Insanity Strikes.

by Natalie   Jun 13, 2006


Her world is spinning so out of control,
Falling deeper into that dark black hole.
Thoughts of life are racing inside her mind,
Forcing her to leave herself left behind.

Trapped inside a hurtful world she calls life,
Reaching for some support without the knife.
Pleading to the sky above, Please no more,
Questions left unanswered just like before.

Insanity strikes when the lightening hits,
Her worst crime of all she's soon to commit.
As the crystal clear rain falls from the sky,
She drowns in her sins and says a goodbye.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

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  • 17 years ago

    by holly

    Beautiful flow and great description. you are a fantastic writer, well done on this xxALLYxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    *Claps* Bravo!! I loved it. Omg your poems are amazing great job. Seriously. Keep up the wonderful work.

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Blah...my computer won't let me vote again...=(

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Again...wow...i can relate...this is excellent...you can sense her pain and you just want to reach through the computer to help this girl...before it's too late...um...yeah...i can be a little weird sometimes...(*smiles peevishly*)...anyways...i loved it...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laffalot

    :O The pure emotion alone si enough to make me love this poem. you are probobly my favorite poet right now. your wrting is amazing. you have a little bit of everyithng. and you know how to write it all!! thank you for being a great inspiration! i noly wish i could write as good as you. thanks again.

    p.s- this poem is so good!

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