Comments : Songs Of Children

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Teh last stanza finished the poem with such a melencholy air, i had shivers.

    a perfect summery of the over looking of child abuse

    thanks for the comments! they really mean so much

    ruby

  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very nicely written poem. I liked the concept of the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Keira!!!!

    Very well written, it really touched me... keep up the good work!
    Keira