This is really good poem. I like it becuase of the the first two line that have to do with the rest of stanza. This poem I would tell to my girlfriend or a crush. I hope you will read and comment on mine.
this is such a wonderful poem, so full of emotion and romance. i truly enjoyed reading this poem. it's great and well written. take care my friend, and it's always a pleasure to read your poetry... hugs.