The Death of Life

by chris   Jun 15, 2006


The death of life.
Another angel cries.
Her tears rain for you.
To let you know she cares.
Another beautiful day.
All soon forgotten.
Today the sun rose for you.
Tomorrow it will do the same.
Livin in the dark.
We all box ourselves in.
Afraid of our path.
To alone to try.
The death of life.
Buried within us.
The graves we dig.
All to deep.
Another beautiful day.
Caught between space and time.
It froze just for you.
So you could grow.
Livin in the dark.
Cause the light hurts.
Its blinding.
But not to the closed eye.
The death of life.
Cold hard heart.
It no longer beats.
But you still walk.
Another beautiful day.
Stars are in bloom.
Guiding you home.
Went without notice.
Livin in the dark.
Self consumes us.
Holds us down.
So we cant breathe.
To the death of life.
Cause it was another beautiful day.
But we're livin in the dark.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is very well writen. I love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    *in response to your comment*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Dawn

    WoW...that was really good! and i wanted to say thanks for the comment!
    love ya bunches
    ~Amber Dawn~

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

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