Comments : I apologize

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    First note:
    'apologize' is spelled like that, not 'apoligize'
    ~~~
    "Though all the years that this has gone by"
    I think maybe you meant 'through' instead of 'though'
    ~~~
    "I furthur promise to always stay sane."
    'further' not 'furthur'
    ~~~
    Very touching poem. I liked the details, and the fact that the overall message is fairly positive.It was a rather different sort of 'cutting' poem after all.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love poems that reflect love and hope and this one does it for me

  • 17 years ago

    by reem@l$

    Its amazing to find people that realize their mistakes and apologize... I think that makes you unique...and the poem uhh i lo0o0oved it :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Ur poem it home....it was good

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissey

    Oh wow I really admire your courage of facing the situations you've been going through by simply just standing up! Apologies really can mean a lot and I hope it did to your friend! Loved this write keep it up!
    -Krissey

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    WOW I like this poem a lot .... Your are very good at writing....i had a friend like that but i lost her she is to busy with her boyfriend to fit me in... oh well thanks for all of the comments they really really help and i appreciate them *THANKS*
    Jen

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This poem is no doubt a 5/5! There is soo much emotion and the poem totally engulfed me and kept my full attention the whole way through. It is an amazing write! I love how you explained that even though you were hurting yourself physically it was hurting your friend emotionally--- The last line was my favorite. It really summed up the poem well. This is one of my favorite poems of yours! Great write and keep up the good work----

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    I enjoyed this poem. Some of the lines run a little long, and you may want to consider rewording them so it flows better. But overall it was a good poem!!
    Thanks for commenting on my poem, I always return the favor!!

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was lovely, very good. And ythank you very much for your comments on my work.
    5/5

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Excellent job, and great message:

    'I've gone my whole life depressed because i thought I was uncurably crazy.
    I think backward and realize that maybe I was just lazy"
    '

  • 17 years ago

    by lexie

    Great message.it was really sentimental which is always nice to see.wonderful work,5/5
    --lexie

  • 17 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    "I promise this because these things I do..
    They're physically hurting me
    But I guess they're emotionally hurting you." For some reason, those lines in the poem really caught my attention. This is well written and i must say if i were your best friend i would be honored. 5/5..

    -Darrin

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aw Sam, great work on this, i loved the whole thing. You're such an amasing friend to everyone, and you're such a talented writer. Great work.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Cute poem...your friend should be proud.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Wow. u really are great at capturing the emotions in ur poems i have very much enjoyed reading them, i can recognise a lot of the feelings which u describe and i envy the talent u have at convertting them into wondeful poetry!