This is a very good poem and you've done it very well. If I wrote something with a title like this, it would probubly be a happy one, but still not as good as this. I love the imagery you created here, and the unpredictability of everything. Great Poem.

Oh awesome :)
how did the contrest go?
hope you went well.
xox sammi xox

Yeah thats good haha mne are crap

Very beautiful. very captivating. well done emma. rock on
love suz

I think that this may just be my favorite poem of yours. You have this style all ur ofwn, and you always rhyme. I think that that's fun. This poem held my attention even more then your others which is saying a lot. Anywho, sorry this comment is rather...blahish.

RLS

Hey gr8 poem! love the details. its amazing. gr8 wrk 5/5

You have a very beautiful style of writting! i really like it!
keep it up!

Ooo very interesting i like it, my type of a read keep it up hon xox sam

I hope you won that contest. You're a very talented writer. And this poem, helped to portray that talent you possess.

"Dolls with tattered dresses,
Silent in defeat,"

Fcuking loved these 2 lines, they were amazing. Such a vivid image! 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Wow. i really love the way you right. its so good. i mean wow. lol. this poem was really good. i like the title a lot. and the poem itself was fantastic. but uhm you spelt one thing wrong.. "encase" its incase. but great job sweetie.