Woww.. i LOVED that last stanza! it was amazing.. this poem used excellent descriptions and language, and the rhymes worked, but i felt that it flowed a bit awkwardly.. but the poem itself made up for that! great write! 5/5
Hi babe, that's so beautiful, and full of expression. Definitely a 5/5 from me!
I hope you don't mind, though, but in the line
"If curiosity gets the best of me",
I'd use the word "better" instead, as use of the word "best" in the same line sounds restrictive.
Also, the line
"The extending of a hand to others while inside they wage war",
I'd use "whilst" instead of "while"
Hope you don't mind me suggesting the above.. I think it may read more fluently, as Jessy commented also.. Absolutely fantastic, and awe-inspiring, though. Well done!! xx