Hey lovely, I really liked this poem, up until the end, and then you lost me. I was reading it all, your beautiful discription and the wonderful memories you discribed and then you said it was an Anthem of a Broken heart. Was it because you has lost it all? Had lost the person you were laying with staring at the stary sky? That was the only guess I had. I don't know, I guess I was just thrown off by the fact that you had such wonderful memories and you said when put together they were an anthem of a broken heart and yeah . . . maybe I am just slow today so can't get what you are trying to write. Either way, your imagery and artisty in this poem is beautiful. You had very gifted with words and diction.

-Tainted

Wow I really liked this one. I'm not sure what drew me to it, but it was really moving and powerful.

Excellent.

joy*:.xx

Beautiful poem showing the fun times and maybe what had been snatched away to leave behind a broken heart.

WOW! that was so amazingg.. that took my breathe away! the imagery was soo beautiful, it flowed well, and the descriptions were brilliant! this is an excellent poem and it deserves way more than a 5/5! truly wonderful work!

Haha, don't talk to me about where I'VE been. You disappeared too!

Aken Sol

BTW, nice poem. Glad to see you writing again.

Your poems are really great, beautiful, descriptive words.you really sre one of my favorites. great job.

You're really good.
great poem