Comments : Holding Me Back

  • 11 years ago

    by oldthings

    Awh, i can relate to this and it's a really really crappy feeling. It's good poem, well written, and heartfelt. I'm sure he'll see your better then the other girl =) good luck

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very interesting poem with passion and flow

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. dont worry hun, just keep your head up! this was really great.. im starting to cry and i have no idea why.. i can just relate to this so well.. the emotion was very strong and the flow was good.. very nice write! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by keep n touch

    You displayed a great deal of passion with this one, very touching

  • 11 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey nice poem- thanks for posting it because i enjoyed it, hehe
    If you could, please check out some of my poems, preferebly If I
    Appreciated- Truely Spoken

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written piece with some strong content and expression. It flows very well throughout and has some well presented themes. The only area which I feel is a little weak is the final few lines, they seem to lack the power of the previous lines and not flow as smoothly.

    In general though it is a fantastically well written expressive piece.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The passion was there but it read a bit awkward to me. Maybe read the poem out loud and see if you stumble on a word here and there. Also check on some of the uneeded words.

  • 11 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wonderful poem-deep---I could tell you put emotion into it-5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "I wish I would've realized it sooner,"
    you used the phrase 'realize it' already, I feel like having it twice so close together isn't good for the poem, so I'd suggest changing one or the other.

    Otherwise, this was a very good poem with a strong rhythm and well-developed rhymes.

  • 11 years ago

    by J Lau

    I can feel the fraustration and emotions in your poem... Nice rhyme and flow.... Good write. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cayce

    I loved it! It had so much emotion in it. You could tell how you felt. The flow was good. I enjoyed reading every line. Great job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥Megan♥

    Oh my gosh! I can relate to this EXACTLY! I read it and couldn't believe how perfect it was to my situation. I like a guy whos my best friends ex and she doesn't like it at all! And all my other friends think shes goin to hold me back from dating him! You are absolutly fabolus at writing! Deffinatly 5/5! I love it! ~Megan~

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    I forgot to comment on this poem!
    here I am ::
    I love how you wrote it and to tell the truth, I can't choose a fav stanza cuz they all are amazing! but probably I like the ending the most!

    You gave me a good impression so Probably I'll try to read your other work =)

    Keep it Up
    Best Of Luck
    NemO x0x0x0x

  • 11 years ago

    by gary

    If this pome is for the one 4
    then stick with it good luck x

  • 11 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Very Nice

  • 11 years ago

    by lana

    I love your passion in this poem it was well done

    you let it all out

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Nice poem.. i like it
    :-D

  • 11 years ago

    by Clarebell

    This poem is something i can relate to as well!! it had a lot of truth and emotion towards the main message. well done it was well written x x x

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    An awesome poem, keep writing.I loved it
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  • 11 years ago

    by Kellie

    I'm crying