Awww.. dont worry hun, just keep your head up! this was really great.. im starting to cry and i have no idea why.. i can just relate to this so well.. the emotion was very strong and the flow was good.. very nice write! 5/5
Very well written piece with some strong content and expression. It flows very well throughout and has some well presented themes. The only area which I feel is a little weak is the final few lines, they seem to lack the power of the previous lines and not flow as smoothly.
In general though it is a fantastically well written expressive piece.
Oh my gosh! I can relate to this EXACTLY! I read it and couldn't believe how perfect it was to my situation. I like a guy whos my best friends ex and she doesn't like it at all! And all my other friends think shes goin to hold me back from dating him! You are absolutly fabolus at writing! Deffinatly 5/5! I love it! ~Megan~