Hey.... i love this poem!!! it holds so much meaning and i dont know if this is what you do but i know i do almost everynight.... but anyways hunni it was a great write and great meaning behind it....

Crystal....

Thats um.... AN AWESOME POEM!!!... you have alot of talent keep it up!!

This is amazing...just amazing great work.

This is awesome and is exactly how i feel. You are an awesome writer and you know what to say.
Nice Job! :)

Wow i really liked this poem 5/5!

That was a beautiful poem! I loved all the emotion you put into it. I can really relate to it. It was so well written and it flowed perfectly. I loved it, amazing.
Great job
5/5
Breanna

This poem would be perfect if perfection existed. this poem carries so much meaning and truth. i would give it a 7 out of 5. 7/5
keep writing

Thats amazing you have so much talent!!

I can relate to that!

Keep it up

Wow that was really good. it was really deep and had alot of meaning and emotion in it. you showed the hurt of depression in it without the usual more gory detail...i dont know if you get that. but you did it in another way which i really liked.i really comend you on that poem.
-xoxo-.

That was agreat poem! I can truely relate. Going throught the motions and putting up a good face, when you are crying inside. Keep it up, you are an inspiration.

This is so good, and i think a lot of people will recongnize them in this, I do.. good job, you are a great writer...

Always say your fine
[Should be "you're".]
Where there safe inside
[Should be "they're".]
There so happy and content
[Again, it should be "They're"

Otherthan all that. I thought it was a great poem. Keep it up =) 5/5

-*>TaLeEe. xx.

OMG.. I L.O.V.E it
this is great
Your so talented...

A senerio we are all used to because we don't want to hurt others, or don't think they will care, or don't trust anyone enough to explain how we feel, so we don't. We go through each day, pretending to be okay until the day it kills us forever and we are no longer about to keep our pains a secret, because it was those pains that killed us in the end.

-Tainted

It's a really nice poem...i really like it...is like what i do all the time....

Omg i love this poem! its really good i love it

Angel, you are a fantastic writer, especially for one so young. 5/5

Hold shit this was my favorite poem!!! i loved it ur really talented feel free to check out some of mine. n dont stop writting

This is a wonderful, and very inspiratioal poem. I really like it! <3<3

MusicallyYours,
Sora The Lonely Poet

Dats exactly how i am. i dont want my frends to find out but not cuz dey cant help me but bcuz i dont want dem to be all sad for me.