I didn't understand this line at first, maybe put a comma between "fun" and "others" it would make it flow better.
Also "Deserted by chose" It should be choice:)
Other than that, great poem, i loved the story of it and I'm sure a lot of people on this site can relate to everything said in this, I know i can. I liked the rhymes, they were subtle, but they were there. Great work.
Great job! The first stanza rhymes kind of confused me, as you rhymed "away" with "away" but also threw "way" in there, so the other line was kind of excluded. A bit confusing.
But otherwise, great job. The flow was great, 5/5
This is really sad---I also had the same question as .x.Natalie.x. I kindof thought that the ''chose''was supposed to be ''choice'' Everythime I reached that stanza I read choice because thats what sounds right. Beside that it flows very smoothly. You have a lot of talent! 5/5 stay strong--