My thoughts

by we_all_live_to_die   Jun 21, 2006


Im alone so alone,
lost in what some people call happiness,
my problems are my own but I dont understand,
where are the answers? In life? In death?
do we only live to die? Why else are we here?
some call me blind some call me ignorant but I dont give a ****
because I know its true

im confused I dont know what to do anymore
I wish I could end it all but I cant
a promise never broken
is what keeps me alive

will I ever find the answers? to the questions I dont even understand
tears to blood,
life to death,
pain to peace,
I dont know how long I can stand it
its driving me insane
im falling,is there anyone to catch me, waiting with open arms?
will I ever find them waiting in the darkness?

the darkness all around me,
I cant even think,
where are the answers,
to the questions I never wanted to answer?

I dwell in the past searching for the answers,
all I find is pain,
trying to escape from the past,
I cant get away,
is there anyone to help me?
or am I forever alone?..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I dwell in the past searching for the answers,
    all I find is pain,
    trying to escape from the past,
    I cant get away,
    is there anyone to help me?
    or am I forever alone?..
    [That stanza was really good]

    I don't even care about rhyming and flow and everything for this one. I thought the emotions you put in this was really strong and again I can relate!! Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well expressed piece, the use of questions throughout this is very effective giving it depth and making the reader think-in turn giving it power.
    The ideas run smoothly into one another, but at the same time have a unpredictable quality. It is very well written in general with no real weak areas

  • 17 years ago

    by brkendown

    I see that most of your poems have to do with darkness and i understand where your coming from! i like the flow of this poem 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Resplendant Rose

    Loved the writing on this poem, though its not really in stanza form, it still flows together well. plus this is just so relatable for me. these are all the questions i wanna ask. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I seem to be able to relate to all fo your poems like most of the people who commented b4 me. You write very well, and this one had a ver unique stlye, athat i thought was captivating, never knowing where it was going to go. God job hun. 5/5

    ravyn

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